Hello Everyone!!!
I hope that everyone enjoyed the excerpt from my new book, Unexpected Surprise! I thought just for the fun of it, I would continue with the enjoyment of posting excerpts from each of the 5 stories in my new release More Time Well Spent available on Amazon right now for $2.99.......
Happy Homecoming!
This next story is called Happy Homecoming: Callie and Denny are parted for nearly a year while he
was working overseas. They meet up again to rekindle their relationship
with some intense lovemaking along with some backdoor fun making
Denny's homecuming memorable.
And now for the excerpt....
Denny gets two of his fingers wet from all the excess
wetness that she has coming from her pussy and then suddenly pushes two fingers
into her bum. It is unexpected but
welcome. After he has her loosened up
some, Denny suddenly takes his cock out of her pussy and starts to slowly move
the head of it into her bum. AAaaaa she
moans loudly. He moves slowly getting
her use to the size. She pushes back
toward him feeling him go deeper. She
lets her breath out as she feels his balls against her ass. He lets his breath out feeling the tightness
of her bum around his throbbing cock.
She starts to move against him faster as he pulls out and then pushes
back in slowly. It is really starting to
feel amazing to Callie so she encourages him to move faster, deeper.
Denny holds onto her hips as he starts to move quicker,
deeper with each thrust. She is moaning,
pushing her hips back to meet his strokes.
Callie is going to cum, it is getting close when he suddenly reaches
down and grabs onto her nipples, pinching them hard, shoving his cock deeply
into her ass as he starts to cum. That
is all it takes to push Callie over the edge to scream into the pillow as she
reached her climax. His yell joins hers
as she cries out emptying his cum deep into her bum, then collapsing down on
top of her. They both lay there
breathing fast and then deeply until they fall asleep as their breathing
becomes slower, more relaxed.
Now I have a question... one about the style of writing here... I have been told that it sounds good to have both the word "bum" and "ass" intertwined and used in the same story.... I am personally unsure if I like it all that much. I would love to hear opinions on this, as if it is distracting to have both words used or if it works for readers.
Good Morning, Ms. Bella ... To me it was a little confusing going from 'bum'(4x) to 'ass'(2x) & back. But I'm okay with either or. Honestly, I've never thought about it. Now I've got to look through other stories & see if they use one or the other or both. LOL Leann
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Good Morning Leann...
DeleteThanks for the comment! I thank you for your comment! People who read it seem to think it is fine but to me... well? Just reading it again when I posted it, I am on the fence about it. I guess as long as I don't get any slivers, it will be all good :O)
Hugs!
Bella