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More Time Well Spent

For the next two days More Time Well Spent will be free.  If you have previously downloaded a copy of this book, please go back and re-download it.  I was appalled at the mistakes that I had found in it when I was putting it up for my blog and apologize... going to have to punish my editor... something very creative I am sure.  I can't wait to hear what people have to say about the stories, if they are more preferred to either of my other books.  Any new topics you would like to see in a story?  I am thinking of expanding my stories a bit... see where they take us.  

Anyway... onward and upward... 

In continuing with excerpts from More Time Well Spent, we are on story number four....

 Happy Homecoming

And now for the excerpt.... 

 

Max moves in front of her, lifting her off the seat she is sitting on to set her down on his lap again in the middle of the tub.  She wraps her legs around his waist when he takes her mouth again for another deep passionate kiss.  He moves her up in one smooth move to sit on the edge of the tub, spreading her legs, smiling at her.  His tongue moves to touch her pussy so quickly that she can’t complain about the cool air that is now moving over her body from the quick change in temperature from the hot tub to the cool air on the deck of it. 

Carmen gasps as Max shoves two fingers into her while he is sucking on her clit. He looks up at her briefly to tell her that she tastes wonderful, then he goes back to lick her skillfully.  She is getting close to cumming again, telling him that she is going to cum as she grabs his hair, not wanting him to stop.  He moves his fingers deeper, adding another one as he sucks harder.  The building climax hits her hard with her muscles tightening on his fingers as he continues to move them in and out.  When it is over, he pulls her back into the tub quickly to sit on his hard cock at the perfect time to make her orgasm go into a multiple one. 

Oh my God Carmen yells, breathing hard riding out the waves of the intense orgasm.  She lays her head down on his shoulder so she can get her breathing back to normal.  Max is still moving his cock slowly deep inside of her.  He tells her he wants to take her from behind now, asking if they could go to her bed.  She smiles at him telling him of course.  She gets up a bit shakily, bends down to get him a towel and he slaps her on her bum. 

It startles her for a moment as their eyes meet and he smiles at her.  She smiles back at him and tells him to watch it.  She hands him a towel, wrapping one around herself, than walking out of the room into the bedroom.  He follows after her.  She takes off the towel, turning around to crawl onto the big bed.  Max stops her as she starts to move away from him, telling her to stay like that.  She is on her hands and knees at the edge of the bed............

Happy Reading!  

Check back tomorrow for story number five excerpt. Please leave a comment and let me know what you think so far... :O)